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Help me Loose My Mind

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comment any thoughts, please! I'm getting so fed up with my art at the moment. Ehh...
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Like I said earlier, love it! :) 
 
Pros:
- Bright colours, nice on the eyes ;P
- good job on the shadowing under the horse
- beautiful stock
- hair is nice, but I'll talk about the colour later
- Detailing is good!
 
Cons:
- Detailing is, like I said, good, but big and somewhat obvious. Try to use a smaller brush ;) (Wink) 
- The hair is a much different color that the horse, I know the stock horse does have some gray in his hair, but he also has brown and light grey. Try to incorporate colours that make the hair more natural. I do however like the way you did the hair!
- Despite the fact that the horse is really pretty, the stock quality itself is not too great. It's a little blurry, and I know the struggle of finding the correct stock to match backgrounds and still be pleasing to the eye is hard, but it's not impossible! :nod:
- the BG blur is weirdly blurred, you should select a square of it, feather it to like 50-60% and then use the Gaussian blur to blur it more evenly.
- You should've painted the eye!! Made it purple or green or something other than keeping it natural
 
That's just about it so far, I really think you're improving a lot! Keep at it! :tighthug: